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Dude?
This clips like hell, cracks all the way...
Some proper mixing would definitely improve the track
3 Tips:
-Make sure all ur instruments stay below 0db, a good range for a lead is -6 to 0 db.
-Make sure ur frequency balance is mixed properly, dont put in too much low/ mid / high freq., EQ ur instruments properly so u have a cleaner mix.
-Structure and variation? It's kinda the same tune over and over again.. some build ups and dynamics would be cool.
Anyway, loving the drums :)
4/5