yaaay!
I'd put the lead in the intro just a lil more quiet.
Drums are done very cool :) well variated!
Melodies are pretty variating too, but the saw lead could be done a lil better i think, make it less high or sharp..
Piano rocks!
Bass is kinda cool too :}
One thing u'll have to work on though is the song structure.. make sure u have an intro, a build up and a maintheme etc.. and practice transitions too ^^
Goodluck, keep it up!
5/5 <==
Kr1z