Kr1z's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[It's a loop!]

aight

man, u have a nice tune there :)
great lead btw! :O

Things u should work on:
-progression: make the changes more smooth, make the song longer.
-drums: make the kick more clear, make ur beat more variated.

goodluck & keep it up :)

Kriz.

Mrmilkcarton responds:

I was happy with the lead too, thank you.

The progression is something I have been thinking about for a long time and still thinking about. I agree with you 100% the progression is bad and needs work.

The drums are something I'm not very skilled at as it is. In my next song I plan to spend alot more time on them. This song I forgot to master the drums XD .

Thanks for the review.

[When winter ends (demo)]

aight

is this inspired by Cordis?
just wondering.
pretty awesome tunes in there, and well variated overall.
bassline is well done too.
Drums could be ever more variated i think.
Keep it up: 5/5
Kriz!

FlamingFirebolt responds:

whos cordis?
well yeah about the beat.. i know its kinda lame. i based it more on the melo and bass then on the beats. but hey, its still a demo! so anything can happen right? :)
criticsm accepted

[*Lighting Trigger* / ZeRo BaSs]

wewt!

congratz, sounds very professional!
cant hear any default FL crap in it, so well done there ;D
also cool use of a vocal sample :) (at least it somewhere sounded like a voice)
very well variated maintheme!
contains all the litl fx'es, the drums, the leads, that a good theme needs.
5/5

mind checking my newest song?

Kriz!

ZeRo-BaSs responds:

Thank you Kr1z!

[Electronic Symphony Remixed]

hmhm

ur lead is pretty cool
the drums are ok, but could be better too.
the main theme is nice.
BUT this song is getting way too repeative, ur repeating like the same tune all over again.
The overall lacks some things, try to put some variation melodies in it or some strings or pads or other leads.
Top5 heh?
hm bah

Kriz.

PsyWoofers responds:

What the fuck!?!?!?!

FIrst of all, I was specting a better review from you Kriz...but anyway, I desagree with you:
The drums are fine, if we use more drums it would become techno or D&B and this is Trance (fast Trance).
Then, We made like 6 melodies for this track, and ur telling me that we repeated the same tune all over again???!!!
We didn't used pads or transitions, cause this is small remix of the 3 movements of the Symphony, we just used some quick transition efects.

Im just wondering something: Did you really lisen to all the track before saying that? Or did you just got jealous that we got to the top 5???

Be honest guys, please.

[*Hot Desire* / ZeRo BaSs]

aith

i dont really like the eurobeat :(
also, try to make ur songs longer!!?
invent some fitting melodies to variate ur songs and make em longer, be creative:)
btw ur song sounds professional.
Drums are done very well!!! nice rhythm & samples :)
Keep it up!

Kriz.

ZeRo-BaSs responds:

Thanks!!

[DJ Derrick--Soaring Clouds RM]

aight ^^

heres a lil review :)
sounds all very professional, no FL'ish crap
intro is long stretched, but sounds nice & doesnt get boring.
u have a very nice kick sample, very clear also so thats good!
some litl complaint is that u dont seem to have a real climax.
the weird fading intro sound is original! :)
sounds all very pro..
So goodjob there!
Keep it up.
Definately worth the 5/5 :)

Kriz.

Yodamanjaro responds:

Thanks for the review!

[Sound of my dream(RdM MiX)]

Yo buddayy

sup? x-D

first of all: this sounds pro O_o
second: TIPS! WOOTBBQ!!
-dont put too much reverb on stuff, it might be annoying
-use a basic rhythm for the kick !! like just kick kick kick kick, on every beat, nothing else.. the kick is the only thing that needs to be this basic rhythm, u can variate the rhythm of all the other drums, just keep the kick on every beat.
-especially on climaxes, put a kick on every 'beat' !!
-i'd make the structure and the changes a lil different. its not a problem, but they could the song could progress even better i think

third: PEPTALK!
-awesome voice xD
-beautiful instruments & leads.
-very well variated song.!
-sounds like uv put alot of effort in it, goodjob!

fourth: CONGRATZ!
5/5!
9/10, check tips

Kriz says: u used my "Come on !" sample :D anyway, song sounds pro! congratz!!
bye!

Kriz.

Bahdshah responds:

Okay! i understand what you said, maybe you could go online MSN and teach me how to change the stuff to make it more awesome! and yes that is your "comon" sample! you prbably gave me a 9 for that1!!!!! xD Lolzx

[Crying Soul[R]-Shinrog]

hm aaight

ffs less reverb on the song :@
and put a compressor on the master :P to make it sound more clear
drums sound kinda standard, u might wanna make em better
tune is awesome :)
leads are pretty good.
Keep it up!

Kriz.

Shinrog responds:

thanks for the tips!,sorry for the reverb,i would've edited it if i could,but i can't anymore.

["Hes a Pirate prev" Nintechno]

mmm

hm u have permission from tiesto & hans?
awesome beat in ur part btw
pretty nice lead too

im just pissed my work didnt make the damn top5
some fuckin haters gave me zeroes
and urs get here unintended aah im fucking mad

Nintechno responds:

Well, im sure Hans and Tiesto have like a Billion copyrights n stuff. But im not making any money out of it. If they contact me though, ill get rid of the first bit (and an autograph)!

Yea, your song SHOULD have been up here!

[(NUB)TiedTheRoomTogether]

nice

hmhm pretty nice & emotional piano
the drums are a lil weird though

BUT WTF IS THIS DOING IN THE 5 BEST OF THE WEEK?

nubbinownz responds:

I have no idea :)