aight
nice melody, (welldone basshunter :D)
pretty well variated, but maybe a lil too repeativ..
cool bass instrument in there!
well put together too in there
the end is a litl too suddenly :D
maybe the drums could be a lil more variated
and the kick could be a lil louder.
keep up the good work, and if u have some time, come check one of my songs :D