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Excellent

Original and well executed :)

The slower bpm of the classical genre blends well with the 2step bpm of dubstep
Keep this up!

broove responds:

Thank you. I'll do my best.

Hey

This is how I'd improve the song:

Cut the last bar, aka the fifth chord in your progression. It doesn't fit in, the 4 first chords do just fine.

The result is rather tending to trance than ambient, except for there's no ongoing kickdrum. You might wanna add a 4/4 kickdrum to make it trance, or make the whole a little less crowded (lessen the leading arp sound) to get a more ambient sound.

Remember an ambient track's strong points are long buildups and long, atmospherical melodies, which don't come out very well in a short loop like this.

I hope this is useful!

4/5

oh hi

NG should introduce a comment section for people like me :)

That being said, i love the bass, u might wanna make an elektro song :)

srsly

LETS ALL BRAINLESSLY LOVE IT BECUASE PARACUNTX9 MAED IT AMIRITE

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xKore responds:

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oh,

hi!

aight

Nice wobble,
but the drumsamples really kill this track :s
Pick other samples than the default FL ones, they are overused by beginners and arent very good;
To get even better samples, you can layer more than one sample and EQ them to get a nice whole.

Good luck ;)

Krik

yellowkowala responds:

i don't use FL i use sony ACID

Howdy

Awesome track for NG, yet I feel theres room for improvement :)

- The generic feeling, I've grown tired of this structure. Try out some new & original basslines & chords, instead of the OVERused I - V - VI - IV

- The recognizable instrument presets: the pad, the trancegate, ... have been used a ton of times, so it would be nice and refreshing to hear something more original.

- The mixing: the overall mix is a tad muddy, you can give your track extra power by mixing the separated channels better together. I.e. the low ends of ur mix should only be filled by your kick & bass, mix the other instruments so they don't interfere in this low end.

Goodluck & cheers,

Krik

aight

Excellent melodies and harmonies there, like F-777 says.

Imo the mix could be a bit cleaner, and the kicks could use a bit more punch.

CHeers ;)

5/5

KTRECORDS responds:

Glad you like it man! You can definitaly hear Don's touch in this song with his unique and enjoyable melodies/harmonies that he is known for. If we get some time, maybe we'll try to crank out another tune like this one. Thanks for the input!

Jason
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