Excellent
Original and well executed :)
The slower bpm of the classical genre blends well with the 2step bpm of dubstep
Keep this up!
Excellent
Original and well executed :)
The slower bpm of the classical genre blends well with the 2step bpm of dubstep
Keep this up!
Thank you. I'll do my best.
Hey
This is how I'd improve the song:
Cut the last bar, aka the fifth chord in your progression. It doesn't fit in, the 4 first chords do just fine.
The result is rather tending to trance than ambient, except for there's no ongoing kickdrum. You might wanna add a 4/4 kickdrum to make it trance, or make the whole a little less crowded (lessen the leading arp sound) to get a more ambient sound.
Remember an ambient track's strong points are long buildups and long, atmospherical melodies, which don't come out very well in a short loop like this.
I hope this is useful!
4/5
oh hi
NG should introduce a comment section for people like me :)
That being said, i love the bass, u might wanna make an elektro song :)
srsly
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aight
Nice wobble,
but the drumsamples really kill this track :s
Pick other samples than the default FL ones, they are overused by beginners and arent very good;
To get even better samples, you can layer more than one sample and EQ them to get a nice whole.
Good luck ;)
Krik
i don't use FL i use sony ACID
Howdy
Awesome track for NG, yet I feel theres room for improvement :)
- The generic feeling, I've grown tired of this structure. Try out some new & original basslines & chords, instead of the OVERused I - V - VI - IV
- The recognizable instrument presets: the pad, the trancegate, ... have been used a ton of times, so it would be nice and refreshing to hear something more original.
- The mixing: the overall mix is a tad muddy, you can give your track extra power by mixing the separated channels better together. I.e. the low ends of ur mix should only be filled by your kick & bass, mix the other instruments so they don't interfere in this low end.
Goodluck & cheers,
Krik
aight
Excellent melodies and harmonies there, like F-777 says.
Imo the mix could be a bit cleaner, and the kicks could use a bit more punch.
CHeers ;)
5/5
Glad you like it man! You can definitaly hear Don's touch in this song with his unique and enjoyable melodies/harmonies that he is known for. If we get some time, maybe we'll try to crank out another tune like this one. Thanks for the input!
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