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Pretty cool song.
Some points u need to work on:
0:18 the preset gate really kills the song for me. Presets are lame and cheap. Try to make your own synth & pattern in order to be more original and give the track more character.
0:46 the FL default snare is really recognizable and unoriginal . Try using another sample, or layer some. Also, try out some FX on the snare or hihats, like EQ, reverb or compressing.
The bass pattern was a blatant preset too. Don't just plainly use presets :/ Also try out some better patterns for that bass :/
1:43 The bridge (variation part) Imo it goes to fast into the chorus chords again. Try a chordchange or a longer monobass part.
The chords used in the refrain are the MOST common chords ever. In order to be original and get ur own style, try some other chords that are less cliched.
The overall is a tad too repeatitive, a change of chords in the bridge and shortening it a bit can fix this
The overall mix isn't too good imo. Make sure ur master volume doesnt go higher then 0 dB (check FL mixer channel). Also, make sure the individual instruments blend well together. You can make sure they do by equalizing them seperately .
I don't mean to be harsh, I'm just pointing out the technical flaws
I hope this helps and lets u improve :$
Cheers,
Kris
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im gona cry now :(
im a HIP HOP ARTIST!!! not dance :(
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Smells like top5 material to me.
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Hey :)
It's coolo, however, I feel like it's lacking a bit of bass atm.
5/5
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I'll see if I can add MOAR!
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to make ur songs shorter than 1 minute?
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The song time limit gods!
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Well produced & well rapped imo.
Keep that up bro!
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Wow..
Im impressed by the mix! Well done, it's clean :D
Good work too on the structure, worked well out!
5/5
3.68 / 5.00 (+ 0.39)
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First of all, I like the fact someone's remixing my song :D
It's hardly ever happened before so wooo happy :)
Some tips on the song:
1) Remove the compressor or limiter or maximizer or soundgoodizer from the master channel, they screw the dynamics of the song. Untrained ears (NG) wont really noticed this issue though.
2)The classic intro is epic, but a tad too long imo.
Good work with future productions :)
Cheers, Kr1z
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EPIC aaight
damn I just love ur style, aaay
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I'm doing fine,
how are you doing?
Cheers!
Kris
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I wish the top5 would represent the 'best of the week'.
Not a 'pure random loop I mode when I was bored'..
Meh the AP is screwed, yo.
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Have to agree with you there either.
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